Ntayombya is right on Steve Hege

Editor, I wish to state that Sunny Ntayombya’s article, “Steve Hege and his lies will be thrown into the dustbin of history » (The New Times, December 12), was a wonderful piece.

Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Editor,I wish to state that Sunny Ntayombya’s article, "Steve Hege and his lies will be thrown into the dustbin of history » (The New Times, December 12), was a wonderful piece. The author clearly follows topical issues nationally, regionally and internationally. Hege really deserves this and more in his line will follow suit. When one supports a terrorist group, they are terrorists themselves. When one supports a genocidaire, indeed he is also one. So Hege will continue to pay that price. As for the DRC government not taking the rebels seriously, they will regret when the rebels resort to the barrel again. They should act maturely and stop taking the Congolese nationals for granted.Ali Hereza, Kigali

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I thank Mr. Ntayombya for the article. It looks fair but always consider written communication as the ability to write effectively in a range of contexts and for a variety of audiences and purposes. This includes the ability to tailor your writing to a given audience, using appropriate styles and approaches. The heading is too long, always lay out clear headings. The sentences are too long which makes your ideas not understood and in academic writings never use passive voices i.e "Bones are liked by dogs” where you can use the active voice ("Dogs like bones”). Reading your article I cannot understand if you are an analytical writer or a narrative writer!Prince, Abuja